Tuesday, January 25, 2011

I  Know Two Little Boys

I know two little boys,
Little as they are to me,
But growing up every time,
 Through my scattered visits;
I see them shape with visions chaste,
As they embrace me,
With a delightful haste;
Pa! They tell me,
“Where have you been?”
I fathom those dark eyes,
Their spring to me – almost unseen;
Solitary yearning with occasional retreat,
Have formed the bygone years,
But with a warrior’s might,
I still pursue my own fight;
Dreaming of a tender future,
With togetherness and repose,
For now in their sublime shoulders,
I place my paternal faith;
A strange enthusiasm ignites me within,
I know they indentify it too;
Inspire my strong arms still to them,
For they realise, they need me,
As I need them,
They know, I identify it too,
For I live in them,
As they live in me,
I know two little boys,
Little as they are, till today to me.

5 comments:

  1. excellent thought , to me a good poetry is that which conveys some thought, some emotion

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  2. highly emotional..... it shows your deep seated love for your father. it reveals how you have always expectedly waited for your father's return home. you seem to have a great concern within yourself that it should not happen with your children - that you should be always be with them. instead of showing your father in the locus, you have knowingly or unknowingly put yourself into your father's shoes. i like the way you have handled the theme so candidly yet so loftily. its a marvellous one!

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  3. i need to say that i was caught unaware there, as you are not quite in a position to have such feelings. but again you are a poet... a father's emotions wonderfully captured there... good job. a father always wants his offsprings to realise or achieve what HE couldnt. Brialliant.... It will take a few more readings for me to recognize with the poem.

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  4. This is 1 d best poem dat i've read abt Fathers jus love yr poems :)

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  5. the poet strikes again.....dude share sum of ur qualities wit me.....
    btw its beautiful......

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